Sunday 29 March 2015

T1 Writing


We are learning to...

  •  write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
Criteria:
  • have an opening statement that tells who, what and when
  • write the events in the order they happened
  • have a conclusion or personal response

Football

I went to the football on the field. We played Break the Ice and I had a blue vest.

Teacher comment:
A good try Jack seeing you were often at Reading Recovery at writing time.
Your goal is to write more than 2 sentences in writing time.

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